帮忙找出对话的错误（英语）高手来

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帮忙找出对话的错误（英语）高手来
T:hi,kim .Would you like to talk about me?
K:I'd like to .I'm free now
T:OK,we are friend one year.But I didn't know anything about your family.Do you have brother or sister?
K:NO ,but I have a sister not bloodrelation.
T:Does she love you?
K:她对我就像对她的亲弟弟一样
T：That‘s good.I have a sister.She is older than me.She loves me too.She was married and she has a child now.Her child is very cleaver.I gived you the picture.Do you remember?
K:yeah.He is a strong boy.And very lovely.By the way.What are you parents do?你方便说吗?
T：I remember I told you.My father is policeman.My mother is a employee in a company.And What about you
K:My parents are businessman.My father is busy.My mother is leasurer than my father.
T:wow,That's cool.Does your family have a pet?
K:yeah,Some year ago.I have a dog.But it was dead
T:OH.I'm sorry to hear that.I had a dog too.But I losed it.
I aways miss it.
K：oh~I understand.rean,we studied here half year.Do you want to go home?
T：ofcouse I want to go home.我觉得我就像块电池,家就像我的充电器,长时间不回家就会变的无精打采.
K：hm~me too.Don't worry.We shortly go home .
T:yeah..
就这些了麻烦帮我把错误的地方修改下两另外把其中的中文翻译成英文（谢绝金山） ..捣乱的就算了

1个回答分类：英语 2014-11-16

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T:Hi,Kim .Would you like to talk to me?
K:I'd like to.I have time.
T:OK.We have been friends for a year now,but I still don't know anything about your family.Do you have any brothers or sisters?
K:Well,I have a sister that is not blood-related.
T:Does she love you?
K:She treats me as her youger brother.
T：That's nice.I have a older sister.She loves me very much.She was married and has a kid now.Her boy is very cleaver.I gived you a picture.Do you remember?
K:Yeah.He is a strong boy and very lovely too.By the way,what do you parents do?Are you ok if we talk about it?
T：Sure,though I remember I told you before.My father is police officer.My mother is a employee in a company.What about yours
K:My parents are businessmen.They are all so busy,but my mother has more free time with me than my father.
T:Wow,That's cool.Does your family own a pet?
K:Yeah,Several years ago I had a dog.But he/she passed away.
T:OH.I'm sorry to hear that.I had a dog too.But I lost him/her.
I aways miss him/her.
K：I understand.Rean,we have been here for six months(半年?还是你打错了?）,do you want to go home?
T：of couse I do.I feel like a battery,and home is like my recharger; if I don't go home any sooner I would be out of charge.
K：Hmm,me too.Don't worry.Let's go home .
T:Yeah,Let's.
既然家里养狗,那么一定爱狗啰,那就不要用it,用he or she就像是指人一样.
修改了一堆语法错误,把句子尽量口语化,替换了一些不合适的词,但原句意思不变.

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