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Someone believes that it is better for governments to invest to preventing citizens from having illnesses than to curing them.To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Hardly can the public reach a consensus on the question whether authorities should be economically responsible for the prevention of diseases or the treatment of patients in current society.I would like to compare these two opinions from the following aspects.
Admittedly,most governments have made a great success in treating the patients recently.There are many countries trying to give the citizens the medical insurance to help them to deal with the normal illness.Also,many citizens are satisfied with the way that the government does.Furthermore,this kind of step helps most citizens to decrease the illness and make a connection between the government and the people.
However,many experts,sociologists and economists advise the government should give more investment to do a good prevention of diseases than to treat the patients.To be specific,the authorities should pay more attention on protecting the environment around the citizens which is a good way to decrease spreading of the diseases.Moreover,the government needs to advertise the healthy diet and lifestyle,and this way can be much better than Medicare after the people get diseases.
In the final analysis,the government expenditure on preventing diseases not only helps people to keep away from the illnesses,but they also decrease the pressure of the doctors and the hospitals.Overall,the advantages of giving investment to preventing the diseases than curing people with illnesses at present.
Someone believes that it is better for governments to invest to preventing citizens from having illnesses than to curing them.To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Hardly can the public reach a consensus on the question whether authorities should be economically responsible for the prevention of diseases or the treatment of patients in current society.I would like to compare these two opinions from the following aspects.
Admittedly,most governments have made a great success in treating the patients recently.There are many countries trying to give the citizens the medical insurance to help them to deal with the normal illness.Also,many citizens are satisfied with the way that the government does.Furthermore,this kind of step helps most citizens to decrease the illness and make a connection between the government and the people.
However,many experts,sociologists and economists advise the government should give more investment to do a good prevention of diseases than to treat the patients.To be specific,the authorities should pay more attention on protecting the environment around the citizens which is a good way to decrease spreading of the diseases.Moreover,the government needs to advertise the healthy diet and lifestyle,and this way can be much better than Medicare after the people get diseases.
In the final analysis,the government expenditure on preventing diseases not only helps people to keep away from the illnesses,but they also decrease the pressure of the doctors and the hospitals.Overall,the advantages of giving investment to preventing the diseases than curing people with illnesses at present.
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