大家评价一下这3个托福作文开头

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大家评价一下这3个托福作文开头
BAR 4 ever 12:18:08
if there is anyone out there who still doubts whether AAA is a splendid way to...,who still wonders if BBB enables us to ...Today,is my answer.To my point of view,I prefer...There are three following reasons.
BAR 4 ever 12:19:46
As the promptly development of our economy,not merely...,but sb also...To my point of view,I stongly recommend that ...Thre are three following reasons.
BAR 4 ever 12:22:19
In our contemporary society,it goes without saying that governments plays a significant role in...On occasion of the monetary use,they face a dilemma,AAA or BBB.As to which is better,to my point of view,I believe that we should...There are three following reasons
1个回答 分类:综合 2014-11-23

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三个开头模板的痕迹都有点太重了.
但相比而言第二个好一些.
模板可以用来凑字数,但不是重复的讲一个意思.
比如1中X is my answer,后面还有i prefer
3中as to which.,to my point..,和 I believe 基本是一句重复一句
 
 
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