Our foreign teacher is talking smiling with our classmates.
这句话哪个地方错了啊?
改：1.Our foreign teacher is talking with our classmates smiling.
=2.Our foreign teacher is talking with our classmates and smiling.
3.Our foreign teacher is smiling ,talking with our classmates.
=4.Our foreign teacher is smiling and talking with our classmates.
分析：1.显然想表达：talk with sb.而不是smile with sb.
2.smiling应该是现在分词作状语,表示主语的伴随情况.容易误改为talk with sb.smilingly 或talk smilingly with sb.因为smiling如果当形容词用,则是令人微笑的,有没有这个形容词还不知道,更不要说其副词形式了.如果有,则是令人微笑地,这是不妥的.
3、4句将主要谓语动词改为smile,talk为次要动作.
