看一下这个句子是否有语法问题

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看一下这个句子是否有语法问题
During the three years,I took part in various students’ activities,played the role of a student leader successfully and delivered many speeches concerning “learning experience” in our faculty.
1个回答 分类:英语 2014-11-29

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took part最好改成taken part
另外如果需要润饰一下,students’ activities最好改成student activities
delivered many speeches concerning “learning experience” in our faculty.在英语里面也显得有点怪,最好换个说法,改成shared my learning experience with my fellow students during several speeches in our faculty
 
 
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