请英文高手帮我看看改改,

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请英文高手帮我看看改改,
帮我更改一下错误,添点枝加点叶都行,谢过!
Good morning/afternoon,Honorific leadership,my dear teachers,my dear schoolmates.
My name is XH,and I am twenty three years of age.
I am a student of the women unite infants’ normal school in Harbin.
I like to be an infant teacher,because it’s not just a heavenliness occupation,but also I like infants very much.
I am a young girl full of energy and eager to become a member of infant teacher,so I will do my best to get this goal
I am a hard-working girl.I have lots of interest,such as singing,dancing,drawing and so on.
In my spare time,I love to play the piano,but not good at it.
That's all,thank you for your attention.

1个回答分类：英语 2014-09-19

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用词不当或错误的我没给你删,只在后面用括号给你一个正确词汇,你自己替换.其它的连续错误,直接给你改正了.你是幼教,是吧?你的学校名肯定是不对的,给我中文名,我给你重新译.你教的孩子的年龄段,再告诉我,因为infant只限 1-2岁孩子.
等你答复,然后给你一个,完整正确的翻译.
Good morning/afternoon,Honorific（honorable) leadership(leaders),my dear teachers,my dear schoolmates.
My name is XH,and I am twenty three years old.
I am a student of the women unite infants’ normal school in Harbin.
I like to be an infant teacher,because it’s not just a heavenliness(holy) occupation,but also I like infants very much.
I am a young girl full of energy and eager to become a member of infant teacher,so I will do my best to get this goal
I am a hard-working girl.I have lots of interest,such as singing,dancing,drawing and so on.
In my spare time,I love to play the piano,but I am not good at it.
That's all,thank you for your attention.

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