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I am the applicant xx.I want to study architecture at xx.From September 2008 to July 2011,I studied at xx.After the university entrance examination,I think a lot of my dream and future.
I enjoy painting and math.And I love the architecture which blends them together.I have visited the World Expo (Shanghai) for three times and I was attracted by the buildings that each has a distinguishing feature which I think is the lost part of the buildings in China.As far as I am concerned,the spirits in the architectures can reflect a time’s culture.Alvar Aalto is my adoring architect.The details such as eliminating the noise from the faucet,painting the ground with warm color show the core of architecture—people.I want to be a architect like him and I am dying to be a architect who can bring other happiness.
The open atmosphere,advanced equipments and knowledgeable professors at xx attract me deeply.I want to be a student at your school very much!
I am the applicant xx.I want to study architecture at xx.From September 2008 to July 2011,I studied at xx.After the university entrance examination,I think a lot of my dream and future.
I enjoy painting and math.And I love the architecture which blends them together.I have visited the World Expo (Shanghai) for three times and I was attracted by the buildings that each has a distinguishing feature which I think is the lost part of the buildings in China.As far as I am concerned,the spirits in the architectures can reflect a time’s culture.Alvar Aalto is my adoring architect.The details such as eliminating the noise from the faucet,painting the ground with warm color show the core of architecture—people.I want to be a architect like him and I am dying to be a architect who can bring other happiness.
The open atmosphere,advanced equipments and knowledgeable professors at xx attract me deeply.I want to be a student at your school very much!
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