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Question,necessary trvel abroad to learn about other counties or see at tv or the Internet. Discuss both opinions and give your own one.
At present, a many student chooses to gain knowledge from electronic devices rather than go outdoors. However, information from the Internet can never compare with personal experience, such as travelling overseas to see different cultures.
Travelling ultramarine is a fairly popular leisure activity and be familiar with other countries' culture, in addition, it is much better for health as playing computer and watching television would harm individual's eyes. According to the survey shows that there are increasing number of teenagers who wear glasses, and most of these situations are occured by over playing computer. Therefore, the advantages of supporting a young generation to travel and learn knowledge abroad prevail its disadvantages.
Personal experience of travelling is memorable, remarkable and meaningful for an individual's life. It is the most pleasurable gift when they recall this part of memery and they could remember what they learnt long and lasting. For instance, from research that did by a Chinese student, it has shown that children who experience the real life during travelling have gained a better cognitive skill and physical skill than those who only learn things from books or the Internet.
However, travelling is an activity that is very time-consuming and costly as compares to learn by clicking a mouse. It is at least took one week to complete a touring with enormous expenses, and this is not including the planning and packing time before leaving. Therefore, those annoying daily life cannot be ignored even for travelling.
In conclusion, learning by travelling is the best option to be taken, however, individuals have to consider expenditures and whether they have enough time to be consumed.
Question,necessary trvel abroad to learn about other counties or see at tv or the Internet. Discuss both opinions and give your own one.
At present, a many student chooses to gain knowledge from electronic devices rather than go outdoors. However, information from the Internet can never compare with personal experience, such as travelling overseas to see different cultures.
Travelling ultramarine is a fairly popular leisure activity and be familiar with other countries' culture, in addition, it is much better for health as playing computer and watching television would harm individual's eyes. According to the survey shows that there are increasing number of teenagers who wear glasses, and most of these situations are occured by over playing computer. Therefore, the advantages of supporting a young generation to travel and learn knowledge abroad prevail its disadvantages.
Personal experience of travelling is memorable, remarkable and meaningful for an individual's life. It is the most pleasurable gift when they recall this part of memery and they could remember what they learnt long and lasting. For instance, from research that did by a Chinese student, it has shown that children who experience the real life during travelling have gained a better cognitive skill and physical skill than those who only learn things from books or the Internet.
However, travelling is an activity that is very time-consuming and costly as compares to learn by clicking a mouse. It is at least took one week to complete a touring with enormous expenses, and this is not including the planning and packing time before leaving. Therefore, those annoying daily life cannot be ignored even for travelling.
In conclusion, learning by travelling is the best option to be taken, however, individuals have to consider expenditures and whether they have enough time to be consumed.
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