难句语法 Consequently the man whose sole concern with the world

我觉得应该把that is shall这个地方的is 改为it 就对了
句子结构是这样的：
Consequently the man 【whose sole concern with the world is that (it shall admire him) 】is not likely to achieve his object
释义：sole concern 唯一关心的事情 sole单一的
全句翻译：结果,这个除了自视甚高之外什么都不关心的人是不会达到他的目标的.
主句为：
Consequently the man is not likely to achieve his object
定语从句修饰the man:
whose sole concern with the world is that it shall admire him
这个定语从句中 主语是whose sole concern 后面的with the world修饰 concern
然后is 系动词是,后面的是一个宾语从句 that it shall admire him
it 指代the world