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帮我修改修改希望英语风采大赛的自我简介
帮我修改修改吧!
Self_ Introduction
By Wiskey
Hello,every one!Do you know Whisky?Yeah,of course,I think every body knows the wine Whisky.So,please remember,I'm Wiskey.But I assure you,I am not the Whisky what you are thinking about.W-I-S-K-E-Y,Wiskey!Now,let me tell you something about myself.
Above all the subjects,I love English best.Learning English is an enjoyment for me.I can still remember that last year an oral English Competition was held in Jiang Xi Province.
I haven’t taken part in an Oral English Competition before.So,I hesitated.I thought that maybe is a hard thing to do and I didn’t have enough confidence.But in fact,I really want to have a try.Mother noticed all of these.She can read me like an open book.She said to me,’dear,there is nothing to be afraid of.Everybody should have their first time.If you don’t want to have a try,how can you touch success?Take a step forward,and then you can succeed.Remember,compared with process,result is not so important.You need more and more opportunities to practice,from them you can improve not only your English level,but also your experience and courage.The enemy you’re facing are not others,but yourself.So,please believe yourself and have a try!’
Mother’s words really encouraged me.I made up my mind.At last,I won the third price.From then on,I didn’t hesitate any more,and I like to accept challengers.‘Challenging myself’ is my motto.Now,this motto brings me here again.I love this chance,and expect to get your precious advice or comments.
That’s all.
Thanks.
帮我修改修改吧!
Self_ Introduction
By Wiskey
Hello,every one!Do you know Whisky?Yeah,of course,I think every body knows the wine Whisky.So,please remember,I'm Wiskey.But I assure you,I am not the Whisky what you are thinking about.W-I-S-K-E-Y,Wiskey!Now,let me tell you something about myself.
Above all the subjects,I love English best.Learning English is an enjoyment for me.I can still remember that last year an oral English Competition was held in Jiang Xi Province.
I haven’t taken part in an Oral English Competition before.So,I hesitated.I thought that maybe is a hard thing to do and I didn’t have enough confidence.But in fact,I really want to have a try.Mother noticed all of these.She can read me like an open book.She said to me,’dear,there is nothing to be afraid of.Everybody should have their first time.If you don’t want to have a try,how can you touch success?Take a step forward,and then you can succeed.Remember,compared with process,result is not so important.You need more and more opportunities to practice,from them you can improve not only your English level,but also your experience and courage.The enemy you’re facing are not others,but yourself.So,please believe yourself and have a try!’
Mother’s words really encouraged me.I made up my mind.At last,I won the third price.From then on,I didn’t hesitate any more,and I like to accept challengers.‘Challenging myself’ is my motto.Now,this motto brings me here again.I love this chance,and expect to get your precious advice or comments.
That’s all.
Thanks.
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