问题描述：
我学习比较差,请求哥哥姐姐们帮我看看我英语作文里这些句子哪些需要修改的,劳烦!
1、The Tower that seened if as Strong warriors as strong .
2、I don't like basketball ,Because I am bad at sports .
3、My workmate‘s Greece teacher Beliccoff （别里科夫）in the city dead two mouths ago .
4、Even though in the most sunny day ,He also wear rain shoes ,He take along unbrella ,but also He must carry on warm cotton quilted overcoat .
5、He always bundle unbrella put bag .
6、 He is heart seened if seven up eight down ,He is unwillingness once more to front went and go home .
7、 The next day he always is upset ,So with sadness in my heart .
8、 In my view work hard can create wonderful future .
9、 A People Kind-hearted will be tease ,A puny horse will be rode .
你们理解错了,我可以理解,对不起,我把我写的翻译一篇吧.
第一个：那个塔看起来和勇士一样坚韧不拔.
第二个：我不喜欢打篮球,因为我不擅长运动.
第三个：我的同事希腊教师别里科夫两个月前在这个城市里去世了.
第四个：即使在最晴朗的日子里,他也穿着雨鞋,他也带着雨伞,而且他穿着暖和的棉皮大衣.
第五个：他总是把雨伞放在口袋里.
第六个：他的心里似乎乱的很,他不愿再往前走回家.
第七个：第二天他总是很心烦的样子,所以我的心里很难受.
第八个：在我看来努力学习能够创造美好的未来.
第九个：人善被人欺,马善被人骑.
各位哥哥姐姐们帮我看看我的语法有哪些不合理的,
1、The Tower that seened if as Strong warriors as strong .
2、I don't like basketball ,Because I am bad at sports .
3、My workmate‘s Greece teacher Beliccoff （别里科夫）in the city dead two mouths ago .
4、Even though in the most sunny day ,He also wear rain shoes ,He take along unbrella ,but also He must carry on warm cotton quilted overcoat .
5、He always bundle unbrella put bag .
6、 He is heart seened if seven up eight down ,He is unwillingness once more to front went and go home .
7、 The next day he always is upset ,So with sadness in my heart .
8、 In my view work hard can create wonderful future .
9、 A People Kind-hearted will be tease ,A puny horse will be rode .
你们理解错了,我可以理解,对不起,我把我写的翻译一篇吧.
第一个：那个塔看起来和勇士一样坚韧不拔.
第二个：我不喜欢打篮球,因为我不擅长运动.
第三个：我的同事希腊教师别里科夫两个月前在这个城市里去世了.
第四个：即使在最晴朗的日子里,他也穿着雨鞋,他也带着雨伞,而且他穿着暖和的棉皮大衣.
第五个：他总是把雨伞放在口袋里.
第六个：他的心里似乎乱的很,他不愿再往前走回家.
第七个：第二天他总是很心烦的样子,所以我的心里很难受.
第八个：在我看来努力学习能够创造美好的未来.
第九个：人善被人欺,马善被人骑.
各位哥哥姐姐们帮我看看我的语法有哪些不合理的,
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