句子改错Thank you for your early reply.My winter vacation began

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句子改错
Thank you for your early reply.My winter vacation began two days ago.It's a long vacation to me.Are you having vacation now?Actually Spring Festival is coming soon here.
In here,January is the middle of a freezing and harsh winter.I hope the weather won't be coldn't until spring come.
My wish for 2014 is to keep a good mood and find things to enjoy life,and you?What're your new year wishes?
把这几句句子一些写得不够好的地方改改,另外再加些短语修饰一下.还有文章开头部分,我原本意思是:我的寒假前两天开始了.虽然它只有一个月,但是对我来说它是一个长假了.
1个回答 分类:英语 2014-11-08

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thank you for your early reply.my winter holiday had began two days before.though the vacation is only one month,it is a very long holiday for me who have to spend my most time in studying.这个开头你可以参考一下
再问: 那后半部分呢,没有要改的吗,我自己再看看吧。
再答: 那我就再给你改一下,稍等一下
 
 
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