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Dear mother:
How are you?Winter vacation began,I want to make a timetable.It would make my life more interesting.I'd like to go with you to make a snowman、 Outing...I want to feel relaxed,so my mother,for our holiday please don't give me a lot of pressure,too many tasks.I just want to relax.The New Year is coming,2011 started a new life also began,hope is coming,let us get rid of 2010 troubles,together go to meet the 2011!Hope you have a happy New Year!Mom,I love you forever!
Dear mother:
How are you?Winter vacation began,I want to make a timetable.It would make my life more interesting.I'd like to go with you to make a snowman、 Outing...I want to feel relaxed,so my mother,for our holiday please don't give me a lot of pressure,too many tasks.I just want to relax.The New Year is coming,2011 started a new life also began,hope is coming,let us get rid of 2010 troubles,together go to meet the 2011!Hope you have a happy New Year!Mom,I love you forever!
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