帮我看看这个英文句子有没有语法错误?

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帮我看看这个英文句子有没有语法错误?
A live performance given by liudehua was held on the evening of July 8 from 7:30 to 10:30 on People Theater , XXX band accompanied.
刘德华个人专场演唱会,7月8日晚上7:30-10:30在人民剧院举行,伴奏乐队是XXX Band,
有错误的话提出修正意见
1个回答 分类:英语 2014-09-30

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A live performance given by liudehua was held on the evening of July 8th from 7:30 to 10:30 at People Theater ,XXX band accompanied.
这样就行了.有两个比较低级的错误 其他还好
 
 
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