问题描述：
修改高中英语作文了4
一个在地震中弃学生于不顾,临“震”脱逃的老师引发了公众对教师责任的广泛议论.作为学生,你认为一个合格的老师应该具有怎么样的品质?
我的作文：
A teacher nicknamed ‘Fan Paopao’ is well-known（well-known貌似有点褒义,但又不知用哪个词替代）for his selfish in the sudden earthquake .To everyone’s surprise ,the teacher should have left all his students and escaped himself ,which led to a heated discussion :What makes a qualified teacher
In my opinion ,a qualified teacher should not only have a good command of teaching skills,but also an enthusiastic attitude to all his beloved students .He should be responsible for all the students he teaches and regard them as his own children .
What’s more ,he should be amiable and can forgive his student who has made mistakes instead of punishing him instantly .
Last but not least ,he should be an honest person .Only in this way can he make us feel that he is a man worthy of our respect and trust.
To sum up ,a qualified teacher should be responsible ,amiable and honest .
自知有许多错误!恳请哥哥,姐姐们指出,提高作文档次.也希望能从文章结构,文采等方面提出意见和建议,
一个在地震中弃学生于不顾,临“震”脱逃的老师引发了公众对教师责任的广泛议论.作为学生,你认为一个合格的老师应该具有怎么样的品质?
我的作文：
A teacher nicknamed ‘Fan Paopao’ is well-known（well-known貌似有点褒义,但又不知用哪个词替代）for his selfish in the sudden earthquake .To everyone’s surprise ,the teacher should have left all his students and escaped himself ,which led to a heated discussion :What makes a qualified teacher
In my opinion ,a qualified teacher should not only have a good command of teaching skills,but also an enthusiastic attitude to all his beloved students .He should be responsible for all the students he teaches and regard them as his own children .
What’s more ,he should be amiable and can forgive his student who has made mistakes instead of punishing him instantly .
Last but not least ,he should be an honest person .Only in this way can he make us feel that he is a man worthy of our respect and trust.
To sum up ,a qualified teacher should be responsible ,amiable and honest .
自知有许多错误!恳请哥哥,姐姐们指出,提高作文档次.也希望能从文章结构,文采等方面提出意见和建议,
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