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When I am a student in the middle school,I have a dream that have a lot of money.Of course,at first,I must have some knowledge so that I can own a place where I can have money.So I work very hard in the study.In the senior middle school,it impresses to me that the friend between classmates and me.I like the life when I in the class.In that time,we either have happy or have unhappy.In a word,the classmates in a place.It is very good.
Now I have the other dream which is that we can in a place where we spent 3 years.In the end,I look forward to we are succeed.
希望可以找出错误,加以指正.
When I am a student in the middle school,I have a dream that have a lot of money.Of course,at first,I must have some knowledge so that I can own a place where I can have money.So I work very hard in the study.In the senior middle school,it impresses to me that the friend between classmates and me.I like the life when I in the class.In that time,we either have happy or have unhappy.In a word,the classmates in a place.It is very good.
Now I have the other dream which is that we can in a place where we spent 3 years.In the end,I look forward to we are succeed.
希望可以找出错误,加以指正.
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