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1.It was the first day of our winter holiday.All of us were very happy.Why?Because we have one months to do things we love to do.We are free.Although we have some homework.But we can finish them in several days.And the rest time we can make good use of.I will have a good rest.
这是我们的第一天寒假.我们都很高兴.为什么?因为我们有一个月才能完成事情我们喜欢做的事.我们是免费的.虽然我们有许多家庭作业.但我们可以按时完成了好几天.和休息的时间我们能利用好.我要好好休息一下.
2.It was the second day of our winter holiday.I felt good.I stayed at home and watched TV.Oh!I wrote an English daily composition.It was my homework.Today,I have slept for 14 hours.I thought I was very tired.It was time for dinner.I must go!I am very hungry.
这是连续第二天我们的寒假.我感觉很好.我呆在家里看电视.哦!我写了一个英语日常写作.这是我的家庭作业.今天,我有睡了14个小时.我想我已经很累了.这是到吃晚饭的时间了.我非走不可!”我饿极了.
3.Today,I had picnic with my friend.Outside air is very good,people feel very comfortable.We are fly kite,play game and so on.We are also ride a bike.We had a happy day.
今天,我和我的朋友野餐.外面的空气很好,人感觉很舒服.我们正在放风筝,风筝玩游戏等.我们也骑自行车.我们度过了快乐的一天.
4.Today,my parents and I was go shopping,and parents take to the streets（上街） is happy,the parents have to pay to buy things.Ha-ha,is really very happy.I love my parents,I too thank them for the care and love.``
今天买了好多衣服,和父母上街就是愉快,父母买了很多东西给我,真的是很开心.我爱我的父母,太感谢他们对我的关心和爱戴了.
5.It was sunny today.I was excited.I got up at a quarter to seven.After I had my breakfast,I went to the city center.It was cold outside.When I arrived,my friends didn’t arrive.I waited for him in XXpark door.About ten minutes left,my friends arrived one by one.After we greeted,we went to the restaurant to have lunch.Oh,We are very happy.
今天是晴天.我很兴奋.我起床在7:15.吃过早餐后,我去了城市中心.外面太冷了.当我到达时,我的朋友没到.我在等待他XXpark门.大约十分钟了,我的朋友们到了.安后,我们去了餐馆吃午饭.哦,我们非常高兴.
