英语翻译我最喜欢的科目就是英语.我的英语老师李超是一个很受同学喜爱的老师,我也很喜欢她.她的英文名Yolanda,她很年

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My favourate subject is English. My English teach, Li Chao is a popular teacher among the students and I like her a lot myself too. Her English name is Yolanda. She's young and full of energy. Though she's a slim lady, she gets lots of strength. Her class is very interesting, she always lets us take a part in her class. Also her class is full of humor which make us want to learn more. After class she likes to play with us just like our friends. She likes to talk jokes with us, discussing the new movies or other interesting topics. So we all love to talk with her. After class she helps us improve our study as well. If anyone dont do their homework well she will not just ignore them. Therefore under Yolanda's help we all study English happily and promotly. Every class she explains gramma and sentense patterns clarefully. Sometimes she may tell some small story as well. So her class is always active and interesting.
We like Yolanda is not only because she has sense of humor but also because her English is so good. We can learn very complex sentance patterns because she always gives us easy explaination for us to understand. In addtion, she also speaks some Japanese. Sometimes if we ask her how to speak a word in Japanese she will ask us"Do you know how to speak this word in English?". Therefore we can learn lots of English words while we learn Japanese.
This is my English teach who we like so much-- Yolanda.
建议把作文结构重新组织一下,内容很丰富,不错,但是感觉稍显凌乱没有层次感：-）