大家帮我看看这篇英文有没有什么错误,

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大家帮我看看这篇英文有没有什么错误,
In 2000,he introduced the first solo album.One of the two boarded the charts singles champion,hit the British pop music.The R & B heartthrob so popular so fast.Awards Ceremony of the British regulars,the age of 19 with debut single "Fill Me In" became the youngest winner of the British singles chart male singer,album in the global sell-breaking 7 1 million,so to speak,if you do not know his exist,then you are equivalent to R & B an idiot.3 platinum records,the first touching the first,with its own unique music.He is a well-deserved king.
中文是:2000年、他推出了首张个人专辑。其中的两首单曲都登上了排行榜的冠军,轰动了英国歌坛。这位R&B小天王迅速走红。英国颁奖典礼上的常客,19岁就以出道单曲 《Fill Me In》 成为最年轻的英国单曲榜冠军男歌手,大碟在全球卖破7百万张可以这么说,如果你不知道他的存在,那你等于是R&B白痴.三张白金唱片,首首动人心弦,带着自己特有的音乐。他是当之无愧的王者
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In 2000,he released his first album.(发行用release,album就是个人专辑不要加solo) Two songs in the album ranked the first place respectively in the music list(专辑中两首歌分别获占据期榜单首位),which greatly shocked the music world好吧,没办法给你一句句说明了,后面乱得不得了,全改了).This R & B "small heavenly king" soon became famous.As frequenter on the Music Ceremony,the 19-year-old singer became the youngest champion of the Britsih Singles List by his debut song Fill Me In (注意请把 Fill Me In 换成斜体,英语没有书名号,一般用文字斜体来表示) and his 7 million album sale all over the world.A man familiar to R&B should know him.Every song in his past three platinum records is deeply moving and composed with different feature.He is absolutely the King of R&B.
后面给改动了下,意思不变.体力活啊.
 
 
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