帮我把(越狱)的这段简介翻译成英文!

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帮我把(越狱)的这段简介翻译成英文!
Michael Scofield是一头陷于绝境欲拼死一搏的怒狮,他的兄弟Lincoln Burrows几个月就将被以谋杀罪处以死刑,但Michael坚信他是被冤枉的.为了拯救了自己的手足,Michael抢劫了一家银行,因此而被与Lincoln关进同一所监狱-- 福克斯河州立监狱.作为一名建筑工程师,他对监狱的建设蓝图了如指掌,带着Lincoln逃出生天也成为Michael入狱的唯一目的.
年长的犯人改造官Bellick教会了Michael很多监狱的生存之道.后来,在狱友Sucre的帮助下,Michael开始与其他帮派广泛结盟,包括前匪首John Abruzzi,和声名狼藉的劫机犯Charles Westmoreland.在监狱外,Michael只有一个盟友--他的辩护律师和老友Veronica Donovan,她也是Lincoln的前女友.
《越狱》在第一季结束的时候,主角们已经逃出了监狱,最后一幕温特沃斯•米勒饰演的迈克尔•斯科菲尔德与几名狱友历漫长的令人喘不过气脱狱,逃出例如狐狸河监狱的封锁.但是故事并没有完结……
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晕,楼上那位朋友的是英文吗?正宗说英语的人估计都看不懂.
兄弟,还是我来给你翻译吧.最后一段稍微有点改动.
Michael Scofield is a roaring lion that is struggling for his life.His brother,Lincoln Burrows,is found guilty of murder and put into prison.He will be sentenced to death.However,Michael is convinced of Lincoln's innocence and formulates an escape plan.In order to gain access to Fox River,Michael commits armed robbery.Of cause,he is put into jail--the Fox River,where his brother is imprisoned.As a structural engineer,he knows about the blueprint of the prison biuldings.Escaping from the prison with Lincoln is the only purpose of his coming here.
Officer Bellick teaches Michael a lot to survive in the prison.Later,Michael bigins to meet people,incruding the head of criminals John Abruzzi and the hijacker Charles Westmoreland,with the help of his cellmate Sucre.The only friend outside is his lawyer Veronica Donovan,who is Lincoln's ex-girlfriend.
The brothers,along with six other inmates,Fernando Sucre (Amaury Nolasco),Theodore "T-Bag" Bagwell (Robert Knepper),Benjamin Miles "C-Note" Franklin (Rockmond Dunbar),David "Tweener" Apolskis (Lane Garrison),John Abruzzi (Peter Stormare),and Charles "Haywire" Patoshik (Silas Weir Mitchell),who come to be known as the Fox River Eight,escape in the first season finale.But the story is to be continued...
楼下那几位的翻译也有一些不妥的地方.举几个例子:
and a growing and Lincoln put in the same prison
林肯是被关进监狱,你的翻译哪来的被动意思啊?而且句子结构不完整.
with Lincoln escape also became the only purpose of Michael imprisonment.
大哥,当一个动作做主语的时候要用动名词.
The old Correctional Officer Michael Bellick has taught many prison
之前一直在用一般现在时,怎么突然变现在完成时了?一个电视剧情节介绍一律用一般现在时.时态要一致!
feishou
你写的是英文还是拼音啊?
"Prison break" in the first quarter ended,the novel has escaped from the prison
用词不当
 
 
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