英语翻译高尔夫球奶酪你争我夺,民间资本private capital与金融资本financial capital纷纷介入

Battle in golf market!Private capital and financial capital are all involved in it,grabbing for lands and people with ability.The great chance contained in golf business also attracts attention from business of real estate,automobile,finance,tourism,clock-golf,internet,etc.Altogether they share this great cake（直译即可） and competition promotes the rapid and healthy development of Chinese golf too.
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