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I’m not sure you’re aware that I can hear your music and voices from your house.Your music is too loud and is not allowing me and my child to get to sleep or have a restful sleep for work and school early the next morning.Sometimes it wakes me up.I would appreciate if you can turn down the music and keep your voices down.
Please drop me a visit and over a coffee you might want to check if you can hear for yourself the loud noises coming from your house.
Thank you for your kind attention.