请帮忙改下这段英文的语法错误.

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请帮忙改下这段英文的语法错误.
Since you gave me some secret photos last night,I have been waiting for some more exciting photos.Could you hurry up?I can not wait!
1个回答 分类:英语 2014-10-20

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这短话没有大的语法错误只是在细节上几个地方稍有不妥
1)出现了两个photos,本着避免用词重复的原则,第二个photot用代词ones代替.
2)通常说hurry it up
Since you gave me some secret photos last night,I have been waiting for some more exciting ones.Could you hurry it up?I can not wait!
 
 
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