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托福口语求修改
我语法很烂,真的很烂……请不要口下留情.
Which campus improvement do you suggestyour school to invest in:
swimming pool,cafeteria ordormitory.Please give specific reasons to support
your opinion.
【Point】
1.Dormitary
2.No hot water
cannot take shower in our own dormitary and cannot drinktea ,caffe or hot water in winter
too bad
we are perhaps have cold.
3.beds are old enough
always make some crunching noises.
4.Some domitoris lived 5 students,somedomitoris lived 6 students,and each other lived 4 students.
Unfair
Too crowded
我语法很烂,真的很烂……请不要口下留情.
Which campus improvement do you suggestyour school to invest in:
swimming pool,cafeteria ordormitory.Please give specific reasons to support
your opinion.
【Point】
1.Dormitary
2.No hot water
cannot take shower in our own dormitary and cannot drinktea ,caffe or hot water in winter
too bad
we are perhaps have cold.
3.beds are old enough
always make some crunching noises.
4.Some domitoris lived 5 students,somedomitoris lived 6 students,and each other lived 4 students.
Unfair
Too crowded
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