本人写了一篇作文,怕有错误,

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本人写了一篇作文,怕有错误,
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Last weekend,I went to visit Old Henry .He was sad.He didn't want to do anything.I told jokes to him.He wasn't happy.I went to a movie with him.The movie was very interesting.I played the guitar for him .But I didn't play well .Then I found his dog .The dog was very cute.
New he is very happy.Because he has any dog and any famliy.
We should help the old people.
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Last weekend,I went to visit Old Henry .He was sad.He didn't want to do anything.Although I told jokes to him,he still wasn't happy.Then I went to a movie with him.The movie was very interesting.I also played the guitar for him .But I didn't play well .Finally,I found his dog .The dog was very cute.
Now he is very happy.Because he has a dog and family.
We should help the senior citizens.
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