英语作文怎么写?写给朋友的两个缺点的建议,要写三个朋友,也就是给朋友们缺点的六个建议,

Firstly for John I want to tell you ,you are a careless boy ,you always put your things everywhere,and you even can't find them by yourself,I think you'd better put all of them in order ,do you agree with me?And Lily,could you help your mother clean the house everyday?She will thank you ,and don't be too lazy ,it's good for you .At last ,I have a suggestion that don't watch TV all the day when you are on holiday ,it's bad for your health.Doing some exercise is good for our body.