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Another famous street food is sumai,which is a kind of dumpling but is totally different from the common one.It is round and its fillings are made of rice.The wrapper of it are made of flour.Sumai can be easily found in markets and stores nearby streets.It is originated in Inner Mongolia but becomes popular in Liaoning province.The most famous of which is Ma’s Sumai.In early times people ate it as snake when drinking tea.It’s a little salty but smells sweet.So nowadays we have it for breakfast and for snake.The material used in it are all good to people’s health,which add to its popularity.
是看英文有无错误 不是翻译成中文……
1个回答 分类:英语 2014-10-15

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单词错误:people ate it as snake 和So nowadays we have it for breakfast and for snake.中的 snake
应为snack
语法错误:
1.in Liaoning province.The most famous of which is Ma’s Sumai.中的which应该改为them或把the前面的句号改成逗号,这样句子变成正确的非限制性定语从句
2.The material used in it are all good to people’s health中的are应该改为is 这里 material应是不可数的
material 在字典中的英语解释是a substance that things can be made from 材料;原料 countable or uncountable .
文中material没有加s ,应是不可数的
错误很少,可能就这些吧
 
 
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