我的初二英语演讲稿 帮忙修改下.thanks～

My future In the future ,I want to live in Brithsh Virgin Island.I want to live in an arpartment with my friends. We can keep a pet dog and play with it.I will work for a company and try my best to do the work.I'm going to make lots of money when I grow up .And then I will treavel all over the world because I want to see different people and different places. Then take lots of photos and share them with my friends.If I'm free ,I will go to the beach in Virgin ,surf the Internet ,play CDs,hang out with friends...I can write articuls and draw pictures. The life can be very easy and interesting .I can do what I like. so ,how can I make my dream come true? Maybe I'm going to study in Hong Kong Univercity .And I will study hard and learn lots of things .Then I can go to Virgin to find a job .Then I will work as hard as possible. I hope I can achieve my dream . 加油哦~!