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帮忙查找英语短文中的问题
Everyone wants to do the things they like,me too.I have too much homework to do every day,so I always feel unhappy.I would like to go for a walk rather than study at home.I want to go somewhere that is fun for me.I like to listen to music .I think it's comfortable to listen to the music .I perfer music that is gentle ,because I can feel my heart beat.
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文章不错,稍有不妥:----I want to go to some place that is fun for me.(somewhere为副词,不可做先行词)
.I think it's comfortable to listen to music (泛指,去掉the).
I perfer the music that is gentle ,(music特指,加the)
because I can feel my heart beating.(beating 一直在跳)
再问: 光这些问题?
再答: 目前是这样
再问: 你是学生还是老师?
再答: 这个重要吗?高中老师
再问: 你是学生还是老师?
再答: 上面回答过了
再问: 嘿嘿,不好意思额,明天我演讲呢,那我就采纳你了,要不要分?
 
 
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