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麻烦帮忙修改一下语法错误
Learning how to be a good member of our society is very important during a child's growing procees.It need efforts from every level of this society to achieve this purpose,including parenting,schooling,education of community and government,eventhough the efforts by the children themselves.In my oppinion,the best place to teaching a child to this society is a school.
Parents,as the first teachers in children's life ,their education is definetily necessary,due to children were influenced deeply by their parents and easily copy the behaviours from their parents.A child would not be a harmful peaple to this community if their parents were good members.
However,it could not be denied the effects by schooling were more useful than parenting.The school itself is a mini society,there are a lot of teachers and classmates are from different locations,having different backgrounds and personalities.Students have to communicate with these person if they want study in the school.They should learn how to co-operate with others which can improve their social skills and communication skills.
Although parents indeed need to teach children to be good citizens,but this is not all duty of parents.The better place to learn these things is the school apparently.
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Learning how to be a good member of our society is very important during a child's growing procees.It need (needs)efforts from every level of this society to achieve this purpose,including parenting,schooling,education of community and government,eventhough(though去掉) the efforts by the children themselves.In my oppinion(opinion),the best place to teaching (teach)a child to this society is a school.
Parents,as the first teachers in children's life ,their education is definetily necessary,due to(改为because) children were influenced deeply by their parents and easily copy the behaviours from their parents.A child would not be a harmful peaple(person) to this community if their parents were good members.
However,it could not be denied (加上that)the effects by schooling were more useful than parenting.The school itself is a mini society,there are a lot of teachers and classmates are(去掉are或在前加who) from different locations,having different backgrounds and personalities.Students have to communicate with these person if they want study in the school.They should learn how to co-operate with others (这里加上逗号构成非限制性定语从句)which can improve their social skills and communication skills.
Although parents indeed need to teach children to be good citizens,but (去掉but)this is not all duty of parents.The better place to learn these things is the school apparently.
 
 
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