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《Traveling Abroad》
More and more people in the city X feel like trabeling abroad in thes decade.There are only about 10000 people traveling abroad in 1995.And there are almost 40000 travelers in 20000.In 2005,the number of people in city X traveling abroad reaches over 120000.
There are many reasons for the phenomenon.A lot of people become wealthier with the developmint of the city X.They think highly of the mental life gradually.They start to find all kinds of entertaiment.Traveling abroad is one of the most popular entertaiment.What's more,there are a number of traveling agency appearing in the city X.They provide lots of ruits adjust to different kings of people .And they help travelers go through the all nicissary formalities.It brings much convenience to travelers.
This phenomenon has influence on many ways.It promotes the increase of economy by encouraging consume.And it builds a bridge between the gap of different culture.People can open their eyes to the whole world.It's very exciting.
《Traveling Abroad》
More and more people in the city X feel like trabeling abroad in thes decade.There are only about 10000 people traveling abroad in 1995.And there are almost 40000 travelers in 20000.In 2005,the number of people in city X traveling abroad reaches over 120000.
There are many reasons for the phenomenon.A lot of people become wealthier with the developmint of the city X.They think highly of the mental life gradually.They start to find all kinds of entertaiment.Traveling abroad is one of the most popular entertaiment.What's more,there are a number of traveling agency appearing in the city X.They provide lots of ruits adjust to different kings of people .And they help travelers go through the all nicissary formalities.It brings much convenience to travelers.
This phenomenon has influence on many ways.It promotes the increase of economy by encouraging consume.And it builds a bridge between the gap of different culture.People can open their eyes to the whole world.It's very exciting.
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