短文改错It was when I was an university student that I did a lot

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短文改错It was when I was an university student that I did a lot traveling abroad.
It was when I was an university student that I did a lot traveling abroad.One day ,encouraged by a professor who said,"Now is the time for you to travel around the world ,enrich your knowledge through actually experiences and having fun!"I decided to do as told to.However,I had done most of my traveling through the Internet after I started to work for a food company.By using the Internet ,I have not only seen the sights of many cities on their computer screen,but also got information about food in different country,As information technology develop,one might be able to do so with making real trips.
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It was when I was an university student that I did a lot OF traveling abroad.One day ,encouraged by a professor who said,"Now is the time for you to travel around the world , enrich your knowledge through ACTUAL experiences and HAVE fun!"I decided to do as told to.However, I had done most of my traveling through the Internet after I started to work for a food company.By using the Internet ,I have not only seen the sights of many cities on THE computer screen,but also got information about food in different COUNTRIES,As information technology DEVELOPS,one might be able to do so WITHOUT making real trips.
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