改错The shopping day was exciting one when a man rushed into t

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改错The shopping day was exciting one when a man rushed into this new shopping centre arming wit...
改错The shopping day was exciting one when a man rushed into this new shopping centre arming with a gun.He wanted to rob the bank in the centre,and pressed the ararm by a mistake and the police came immediately.He felt frightened and tried to escape,but the police were alert.They rushed into the centre through an emergency exit he were very eager to catch the man.The man puts away his gun and tried to hide myself in the ctowd.However,the police were not confused and guessed which one was the thief.Two police officer were walking towards him.They arrested him immediately after he could run away.
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