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【写了篇英语演讲稿参加比赛
『只要把改好的再发一遍就行了』
I AM CHINESE
Chinese is a people with brightness and diligence.I’m proud of being a Chinese.
China has a long history.There’re many wonders in china such as the Great Wall,the summer palace,The Ming Tombs,the Forbidden City an so on.Thousands of foreign people visit to china every year.Now,2008 Beijing Olympics is coming.More and more people all over the world know China.So I’m proud of being a Chinese.
China has wonderful culture,too.For example,Beijing opera is one of the most costly culture treasures.Some roles in Chinese literatures are famous such as Sun Wukong,Zhu Bajie and so on.I ‘m proud of being a Chinese.
China has not only wonderful culture,but also has many great people.Such as the famous inventer,Zhang Heng,and the mathematician Chen Jingrun and so on.They made much achievement.
I have black eyes,black hair and yellow skins.I am a Chinese.I love China.Whatever happen,I will always proud of being a Chinese!
Thank you.
其他在意思表达上或者语法上没有问题吗？
『只要把改好的再发一遍就行了』
I AM CHINESE
Chinese is a people with brightness and diligence.I’m proud of being a Chinese.
China has a long history.There’re many wonders in china such as the Great Wall,the summer palace,The Ming Tombs,the Forbidden City an so on.Thousands of foreign people visit to china every year.Now,2008 Beijing Olympics is coming.More and more people all over the world know China.So I’m proud of being a Chinese.
China has wonderful culture,too.For example,Beijing opera is one of the most costly culture treasures.Some roles in Chinese literatures are famous such as Sun Wukong,Zhu Bajie and so on.I ‘m proud of being a Chinese.
China has not only wonderful culture,but also has many great people.Such as the famous inventer,Zhang Heng,and the mathematician Chen Jingrun and so on.They made much achievement.
I have black eyes,black hair and yellow skins.I am a Chinese.I love China.Whatever happen,I will always proud of being a Chinese!
Thank you.
其他在意思表达上或者语法上没有问题吗？
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