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My faverite citi is shanghai.
Shanghai is a big city .And it's east.Shanghai is a very beautiful city .There are so many park and garden in it.And there are also many place of intrest in shanghai.For exanple,the bund,the Jinmso building,the Science and Technology Museam and the famous building --- Oriental Pearl TV Tower.
And I know ,many many writer are from shanghai.Like Han han ,Rao xue man ...My dream is be a writer .So I like shanghai very much!And you?
My faverite citi is shanghai.
Shanghai is a big city .And it's east.Shanghai is a very beautiful city .There are so many park and garden in it.And there are also many place of intrest in shanghai.For exanple,the bund,the Jinmso building,the Science and Technology Museam and the famous building --- Oriental Pearl TV Tower.
And I know ,many many writer are from shanghai.Like Han han ,Rao xue man ...My dream is be a writer .So I like shanghai very much!And you?
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