请帮我看看有没有语法错误,或者意思表达不对之类问题.

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请帮我看看有没有语法错误,或者意思表达不对之类问题.
 

 

 
1个回答 分类:综合 2014-11-26

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好多错误啊 手贱 点了 没时间了
再问: 能不能帮我改一下
再答: 好的 等等啊 给我点时间
再问: 我把原文发给你吧
再问: I come from China, liaoning province.
I like to go around for trips, but my mother is a traditional person,there are a lot of things what I do are against her, so it make me more rebellion. My mother's temper had becoming more and more badly,so I don't like to go out for traveling with her , so this time I go to Thai with my classmates:)
再问: In fact ,I didn't interested in Thai things. there are only know Thailand beautiful people demon until then I looked a film which name is สิ่งเล็กเล็กที่เรียกว่า...รัก(ChuLianZheJianXiaoShi) you know
再问: At that time I began to get attention to actor Mario , and then I collect information about Thailand, and to the mysterious countries is full of curiosity.I paid ten days to fall a love with Thailand, but I made a decision to take a look at Thai in a moment.
再问: A lot of people go to Thailand because there is a famous film which called Thai jiong, but I because of สิ่งเล็กเล็กที่เรียกว่า...รัก.When I'm in high school I have a boyfriend. I love him.
再问: I enjoyed what we are together the days , we often go to a sea in China . we pass three years together , but after high school he was admitted in the best university in China ,as I'm happy for him , we lost contact.Now we are broken. What a pity,right.
再问: He don't love me any more, but I am.
This time I and my friend go for Thailand to go to the sea.I think I can begin a new life.
This is my story, What do you want to know about me else?
再问: 看没?
再答: 正改着呢 你是用的翻译机器吧
再问: 嗯,是啊
再问: 还在吗…
再答: 好了 但是 字数超了 我在改改
再答: I come from China, liaoning province.
I like to go around for travelling, but my mother is a traditiona lwoman,there are lots of things that I do against her, so it make me more rebellious than before。My mother's temper is getting worse,so I don't want to go out for traveling with her , so this time I go to Thai with my classmates:)
In fact ,I am not interested in Thai things. there are many beautiful Shemale in Thailand and I have looked a film whosename is สิ่งเล็กเล็กที่เรียกว่า...รัก(ChuLianZheJianXiaoShi)

还有一部分 我两次发给你
再答: At that time I began to get attention to actor Mario , and then I collect information about Thailand, The mysterious countries is full of curiosity.I spend ten days in Thailandand have fallen in love with it。otherwise, I have made a decision taking a look at Thai in a moment.

Lots of people go to Thailand because there is a famous film which called Thai jiong, but I
go to Thailand because of สิ่งเล็กเล็กที่เรียกว่า...รัก. I have a boyfriend When I'm studying in high school. I love him.

I enjoyed the time we are together , we often walk along the sea in China . we live together three years , when we graduated he was admitted in the best university in China and I am happy for him ,。what‘s more, we can’t contact with each other. What a pity.
He don't love me any more。I no longer love him。
This time I go toThailand with my friends walking along the sea.I think I can live a new life.
This is my story, What else do you want to know about me ?
再答: 太累了 求采纳!
 
 
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