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麻烦各位大师看看我写的这篇英语短文语法和外国人使用习惯对不对
I love myself
Hello everyone,my name is Huang,Jeff Huang ,Chinese name is xxx,I’m 13 years old,height 165 cm,weight unknown.I got some pimples on my face recently.Even so,I still think I’m handsome.I like PE very much,In all my favorite in thesport of basketball.I can play it verywell,I usually use shot medium,and I like “Houston Rockets” and player James Harden very much.I like listen to Classical music,I like Mozart very much.I also like listento English songs very much.My favourite singing star is Elton John ,I likehis song 《Can You Feel The Love Tonight》very much.My favorite subject is Maths.Because itcan makes a man clever.I like reading Dale Carnegie and Verne's book verymuch.I want to make steady progress,make good progress in Middle School.
I love myself
Hello everyone,my name is Huang,Jeff Huang ,Chinese name is xxx,I’m 13 years old,height 165 cm,weight unknown.I got some pimples on my face recently.Even so,I still think I’m handsome.I like PE very much,In all my favorite in thesport of basketball.I can play it verywell,I usually use shot medium,and I like “Houston Rockets” and player James Harden very much.I like listen to Classical music,I like Mozart very much.I also like listento English songs very much.My favourite singing star is Elton John ,I likehis song 《Can You Feel The Love Tonight》very much.My favorite subject is Maths.Because itcan makes a man clever.I like reading Dale Carnegie and Verne's book verymuch.I want to make steady progress,make good progress in Middle School.
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