来看看这说的对吗?Can't imagine one day without you,

来看看这说的对吗?Can't imagine one day without you,
Can't imagine one day without you,
我无法想象一天没有你
don't leave me
别离开我
i just wanna love you,
我只想爱着你
Make it last forever.
就这样到永远.
能帮我看看有没有语法上的错误.
额
能说全面点吗？
能把你们说的哪里有错误该成中文。有些地方我衔接不上
比如这样
Can't imagine one day without you，
我无法想象一天没有你
如果这么说好点：can't live one day without you......