for he today who sheds his blood with me shall be my brother

for he today who sheds his blood with me shall be my brother有没有语法错误
For he today who sheds his blood with me shall be my brother.
For he who today sheds his blood with me shall be my brother.
这俩句那个对啊
那为什么第一句是错的谢谢
he today who sheds his blood with me shall be my brother.