快要考试了,本人初二上学期,求英语作文：The most interesting day.要用所学过的单词（60字左右）

One day in winter holiday,all my family went to climb a mountain.Father told my elder sister and I that the first one to get to the top of the mountain would be given a toy.Hearing this ,we began to climb.I was soon tired.I didn't give up.That toy attracted me to run foaward,in the end I reached the top first.On the top we enjoyed the beautiful view and had a picnic.At dusk,we went down the mountain happily.I was the happist one.What an interesting day!
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