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我总觉得文章很奇怪,
My name is ***.I am twenty years old and my birthday is in July.I have lots of interest,suches reading,singing,duawing,etc.Recently I want to travel abroad,so I am trying to save money.If you have such a plan,perhaps we can to go together.
I'm very happy to come here to study with you .I hope I can become your friend soon and to complete our studies.
我总觉得文章很奇怪,
My name is ***.I am twenty years old and my birthday is in July.I have lots of interest,suches reading,singing,duawing,etc.Recently I want to travel abroad,so I am trying to save money.If you have such a plan,perhaps we can to go together.
I'm very happy to come here to study with you .I hope I can become your friend soon and to complete our studies.
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