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A boy who's father left his mother and him was very loving music.but his family was very poor.His mother was a former web designer and she also was a singer in a church band.And two jobs just to made ends meet.They lived in public housing,so the boy could not singing in it.But he never give up his hobit .He even played his music in front of a theatre to earn money to buy an old guita.And now,he becoming a famous star.
A boy who's father left his mother and him was very loving music.but his family was very poor.His mother was a former web designer and she also was a singer in a church band.And two jobs just to made ends meet.They lived in public housing,so the boy could not singing in it.But he never give up his hobit .He even played his music in front of a theatre to earn money to buy an old guita.And now,he becoming a famous star.
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