能告诉我这篇文章的错可以帮我改正一下吗

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能告诉我这篇文章的错可以帮我改正一下吗
YangShuo,a tourist city in Guangxi,is 65 kilometres away from Guilin.It is famous for its beautiful scenery and rich time.Western Street and Moon Mountain are good places for you to visit.In YangShuo.you can go trip boat,eat locate deilcious food in that and hires cycle to go to difficult life ---------------- ------------------------------------ to YangShuo.It 's great fun going trip boat to Li river,looks for Gunlin Mountain and river.This is life.Will you go to Guangxi,you should go the YangShuo,the senery is very well.∕ \ (加)
1个回答 分类:英语 2014-11-26

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trip boat 用 cruise代替;
hires cycle to go to difficult life to YangShuo.有点看不明白想表达的原意,麻烦说明一下.
再问: 在阳朔可以租用单车去体验乡村生活
再答: You can rent bicycles to experience the country lifestyle. hire是雇佣,rent是租用; 单车就是自行车不用把Bi-去掉。
再问: trip boat可以改一下吗 我英语不好 不会用那么好的单词 老师会怀疑的 改简单点
再答: In YangShuo, you can travel by boat, also can eat local delicious food. 刚没注意Locate也要改一下;Local是当地的,而Locate是位于。。的动词。
 
 
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