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TITLE：Nowadays we are seeing more and more exhibitions and sculptures appearing in public places.It is wrong that governments are funding artist projects when there are more important things we could be doing with tax payers money.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Currently,an increasing number of art projects have been funded publicly by any means,and escalating number of people are questioning the true value of this action,refuting that government should not be collecting tax payer’s money to support exhibitions and public sculptures that many people do not visit or appreciate.Indeed,they believe that more fields are needed to be invested like education,and that art objects,therefore,are ought to be patronized by devoted fans,as sporting events are,or by way of confidential philanthropy.For me,I agree with this point badly.
By way of forming my own opinion to the assigned statement,I will discuss the many drawbacks of putting too much money into art field.That is,it is actually inappropriate to lay more stress on this field at one period.First and foremost,focusing on this point may lead to overlook other crucial things more or less,which,in fact,need more attentions from the country.Obviously,this would cause a series of problems and even intervene a regular development which has been originally designed.
What is needed,therefore,is focusing on the field of education.What is meant by this is that the question of education,even viewed from the whole world,always lies on the top of people’s list.Consequently,all of the governments all over the world are supposed to give supports to relative sections where provide sufficient teaching equipments and adequate teachers for children from pregnancy.Also,government has the obligation to make sure that every child has the chance to receive formal education,because that is the central to a country.
Therefore,although I respect the aim of supporting art projects to some degree,I believe the best or only place which is worthy to be granted is still the education.Admittedly,it is perhaps long investigation,nevertheless,it is the most valuable and realistic policy.
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TITLE：Nowadays we are seeing more and more exhibitions and sculptures appearing in public places.It is wrong that governments are funding artist projects when there are more important things we could be doing with tax payers money.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Currently,an increasing number of art projects have been funded publicly by any means,and escalating number of people are questioning the true value of this action,refuting that government should not be collecting tax payer’s money to support exhibitions and public sculptures that many people do not visit or appreciate.Indeed,they believe that more fields are needed to be invested like education,and that art objects,therefore,are ought to be patronized by devoted fans,as sporting events are,or by way of confidential philanthropy.For me,I agree with this point badly.
By way of forming my own opinion to the assigned statement,I will discuss the many drawbacks of putting too much money into art field.That is,it is actually inappropriate to lay more stress on this field at one period.First and foremost,focusing on this point may lead to overlook other crucial things more or less,which,in fact,need more attentions from the country.Obviously,this would cause a series of problems and even intervene a regular development which has been originally designed.
What is needed,therefore,is focusing on the field of education.What is meant by this is that the question of education,even viewed from the whole world,always lies on the top of people’s list.Consequently,all of the governments all over the world are supposed to give supports to relative sections where provide sufficient teaching equipments and adequate teachers for children from pregnancy.Also,government has the obligation to make sure that every child has the chance to receive formal education,because that is the central to a country.
Therefore,although I respect the aim of supporting art projects to some degree,I believe the best or only place which is worthy to be granted is still the education.Admittedly,it is perhaps long investigation,nevertheless,it is the most valuable and realistic policy.
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