英语高手帮我检查一篇英语短文

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英语高手帮我检查一篇英语短文
My favourite cartoon character
My favourite cartoon character is luffy.He is one of the leading characters of a feature-length cartoon.The cartoon called “one piede” and I like this cartoon very much.
Luffy is a pirate.He is the captain of his sea rover.He always fight with the navy and gets them into troubnle.He also hate the bad eggs.
Luffy is hot-blooded and impulsive.Most of people think pirates are bad eggs,but luffy isn’t.He is a righteous guy.he always helps the people who are in trouble though he doesn’t know them.He gets lots of friend because of his temperament,.He wants to be the king of pirates.This is his principle.
I like luffy very much,because he tells us an important things:believe yourself,then you can make your dream come true.
高手们帮我检查检查有没有什么语法错误,顺便翻译,答得好的追加到50!
PS:不要上网去在线翻译来浑水摸鱼,没分的啊.要是在线翻译的出来我也不用来找高手了.
1个回答 分类:英语 2014-11-23

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额……既然是介绍路飞的,那么不是海贼迷的是翻不好的.我帮你加了一些简单的成分,突出路飞的性格特点.
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My favourite cartoon character
My favourite cartoon character is luffy.He is one of the leading characters of a feature-length cartoon.The cartoon called “one piede” and I like this cartoon very much.
Luffy is a pirate.He is the captain of his sea rover.He always fight with the navy and gets them into troubnle.
Luffy is not tall or handsome.He is not clever,either.But he is hot-blooded and impulsive.Many people think pirates are bad guys,but luffy isn’t.He is a righteous guy.he always helps the people who are in trouble though he doesn’t know them.He gets lots of friend because of his temperament,.He always does some funny and absurd things.
Luffy wants to be the king of pirates.This is his principle.
I like luffy very much,because he tells us an:believe yourself and never give up,then you can make your dream come true.
翻译:
我最喜欢的卡通人物
我最喜欢的卡通人物是路飞.他是一部长篇卡通的主角之一.这部卡通叫做“One Piece(海贼王)”,我非常喜欢这部卡通.
路飞是个海贼.他是他的海贼船的船长.他总是与海军对抗并且给他们带来麻烦.
路飞不高挑不帅气,也不聪明.但他热血,冲动.很多人都认为海贼都是坏人,但路飞不是.他是个正直的人.他总是帮助那些处于困难中的人,尽管他并不认识他们.因为他的这种性格,他得到了许多朋友.他总是做一些可笑而荒唐的事.路飞想要成为海贼王,这是他的信念.
我非常喜欢路飞,因为他告诉我们:相信自己,不轻言放弃,那么,你就可以使你的梦想成真.
 
 
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