我这句英文写的好么?有错误么?有需要改正的地方么

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我这句英文写的好么?有错误么?有需要改正的地方么
I neither drink nor smoke,don't have sex and play no video games either.The purpose of my being such stoic is to hone myself in order to become stronger faster and smarter

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I don't drink or smoke ,I'm a virgin and I don't fancy those video games neither,The reason why I being so decent is in order to become better faster and stronger.( better faster stronger 是从kanye west 的巅峰之作stronger 中引用的,这样的形容词顺序会增色不少.）

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