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Recently the issue of whether or not accept equal members of male and female students in every suvject has been in the limelight and has aroused wide concern in the public.in this essay,i aim to explore this complicate phenomenon from diverse perspectives,identify the relevant contributing factors and bring up some effectve measures.on a personal note,i am approve of that the students should be seperate as same amount in male and female in every subject.
some people suggest that the man have more creative than woman in some subjects such as methematics.one of dsquieting facts stemming from this is that some woman will give up their right to choice the Science and mathematics Education.this has resulted in the extreme disparity between the male and the female students.however,in my opinion,accepted equal members of male and female in school are very important.
as far as i am concerned,an arry of integrated factors contributing to this complicate phenomenon and here i would explore only a few of the most important ones.The first important reason is the corporation demand all kinds of talents not only for male.Another major important factor is some important suitable work for woman such as secretary.Because the characteristics of woman is more patient than man.And the most frequently stress one is the woman aware satisfaction,so that the manager can stay his employee more easily.
In conclusion,given the factors i have just outlined,it is safe to draw the conclusion that the male and female have same education chance in very subjects are more advantageous and will definitely have great positive influence.
Recently the issue of whether or not accept equal members of male and female students in every suvject has been in the limelight and has aroused wide concern in the public.in this essay,i aim to explore this complicate phenomenon from diverse perspectives,identify the relevant contributing factors and bring up some effectve measures.on a personal note,i am approve of that the students should be seperate as same amount in male and female in every subject.
some people suggest that the man have more creative than woman in some subjects such as methematics.one of dsquieting facts stemming from this is that some woman will give up their right to choice the Science and mathematics Education.this has resulted in the extreme disparity between the male and the female students.however,in my opinion,accepted equal members of male and female in school are very important.
as far as i am concerned,an arry of integrated factors contributing to this complicate phenomenon and here i would explore only a few of the most important ones.The first important reason is the corporation demand all kinds of talents not only for male.Another major important factor is some important suitable work for woman such as secretary.Because the characteristics of woman is more patient than man.And the most frequently stress one is the woman aware satisfaction,so that the manager can stay his employee more easily.
In conclusion,given the factors i have just outlined,it is safe to draw the conclusion that the male and female have same education chance in very subjects are more advantageous and will definitely have great positive influence.
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