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修改一篇英语文章
请大家帮我改一改语法错误,最好在写奥运会志愿者那里在帮我加几句
It is said that every heart has its own sorrow..yes,living in the world,we must experience lots of frustrations and difficulties,which are unforeseen,traffic accident,floodwater,illness,etc.we can’t predict that when they will happen...when we have difficulties,we can turn to others,others' help are so important to us that I can’t imagine how the life will be without it.
Help is needed in everyone’s daily life.One day,I had a stomachache,I felt terrible.my best friend looked after me carefully.No words can express my thankfulness to her for the help .He offered me a cup of hot water,and told me to have the medicine.In addition,she also cleaned the classroom instead of me (that day,I was on duty).
All of above tell us a truth——everyone needs help .Do you know volunteers,they are a group of people who always help others without expecting any rewards.They devote their whole life to people who need help.They are heroes who are ordinary people but have noble-minded spirits ,such as the volunteers of the 2008 Olympic Games.They give helps to the 2008 Olympic Games,but ask nothing they only want to make a contribution to China.they set examples for us to help others.If someone asks me this question -----who is the greatest person in the world ,I will replied him without hesitation ----volunteers!
My friend’s help makes me moved and let me get out of trouble,and I think your help will make more and more people feel warm,everyone needs help,why don’t us be a warmhearted person,Give a helping hand as a volunteers and make a contribution to others .let’s create a better and nicer tomorrow together.
请大家帮我改一改语法错误,最好在写奥运会志愿者那里在帮我加几句
It is said that every heart has its own sorrow..yes,living in the world,we must experience lots of frustrations and difficulties,which are unforeseen,traffic accident,floodwater,illness,etc.we can’t predict that when they will happen...when we have difficulties,we can turn to others,others' help are so important to us that I can’t imagine how the life will be without it.
Help is needed in everyone’s daily life.One day,I had a stomachache,I felt terrible.my best friend looked after me carefully.No words can express my thankfulness to her for the help .He offered me a cup of hot water,and told me to have the medicine.In addition,she also cleaned the classroom instead of me (that day,I was on duty).
All of above tell us a truth——everyone needs help .Do you know volunteers,they are a group of people who always help others without expecting any rewards.They devote their whole life to people who need help.They are heroes who are ordinary people but have noble-minded spirits ,such as the volunteers of the 2008 Olympic Games.They give helps to the 2008 Olympic Games,but ask nothing they only want to make a contribution to China.they set examples for us to help others.If someone asks me this question -----who is the greatest person in the world ,I will replied him without hesitation ----volunteers!
My friend’s help makes me moved and let me get out of trouble,and I think your help will make more and more people feel warm,everyone needs help,why don’t us be a warmhearted person,Give a helping hand as a volunteers and make a contribution to others .let’s create a better and nicer tomorrow together.
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