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Many people are optimisticabout the 21st century and see it as an opportunity to make positive changes to the world. To what extent do you agree with their optimism? What changes should we made to the world in the new century?
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Nowadays there no denying that how the world changes in the 21th century has become a heat argument on which people hold quite diverse standpoints. Many people are optimistic about the 21th century and believe it as a opptunity to make the world a better one. As far as I conserned, I am of viewpiont that it is essentially important to make good use of our technology and resources. Because this is a double-edged sword, which would realize our dreams or destroy our homeland.
Technology has brought us thousands of amazings. It makes our lives easy and cosy. Yet the troubles it brings to us are not supposed to be underestimated. The vital issue is environmental deterioration. People living in metropolises consume sumless energy, which is stimulating overmining and industrializing. This sort of profitable activities make air and water contamination and suffer the people themselves. To settle this vicious circle is the first thing we are going to do.
In addition, resources are rapidly disappearing from the earth. And disasters visit to us oftenly instead. Tsunami, earthquakes and the Melting ice in Antarctica, all of them are warning us to utilize resources properly and treat the nature nicely.
I wish I was one of the optimist, but if people have far-sight and do everything with concept of continuously development. I will be more confident about a better world in 21th century.
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