短文改错 It is very common that conflicts between

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短文改错 It is very common that conflicts between
It is very common that conflicts between teachers and students often happens.For example,a girl in our class didn't hand her homework yesterday,and was criticizes by our English teacher.She felt it was unfair and talked back to the teachers,which made the teacher very angry.Later,it turned out that the girl didn't feel good the day before yesterday.
But in most cases,conflicts between people from misunderstanding.If the girl had realized that the teacher did so just for his sake ,or the teacher had first asked the girl that why she didn't finish her homework,the conflict would have been avoided.Therefore,teachers and students should communicate much and understand each other.
In my opinion,put yourself in other's shoes is the key to avoid conflicts.
1个回答 分类:英语 2014-11-03

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1.For example,a girl in our class didn't hand her homework yesterday.应该把hand改为hand in (上交),这个女孩昨天没有上交作业
2.talked back to the teachers.应该将teachers改为teacher,应为这里the teacher 特指english teacher
3.the girl didn't feel good the day before yesterday.good改为well,feel well为固定用法,意思为感觉不好,或者是心理不舒服
4.the girl didn't feel good the day before yesterday,改为the girl hadn't felt well the day before yesterday将before改为until,直到昨天这个女孩还是心里不太舒服,同时时态应该为过去完成时,因为这个女孩从这件事发生到昨天这一段时间,心情都不好,这是一个持续的状态,同时到过去的某个时间状态结束,昨天结束.
5.conflicts between people from misunderstanding.介词使用错误不能用from,原意为人们往往因为误解而产生冲突.所以改为due to 或者是 for
6.just for his sake ,应该为 just for her sake,上文说了是个女孩
7.the teacher had first asked the girl that why she didn't finish her homework,that和why不用同时存在,将that去掉
8.Therefore,teachers and students should communicate much and understand each other.
communication 的用法为communication with sb.,不可以单独使用.应该为Therefore,teachers and students should communicate much with and understand each other.
9.put yourself in other's shoes is the key to avoid conflicts.动词原形不可以直接作主语,所以改为putting yourself in other's shoes is the key to avoid conflicts或者是 to put yourself in other's shoes is the key to avoid conflicts
 
 
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